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heartcore:. chp 01 page 05 REDUX by tlwelker heartcore:. chp 01 page 05 REDUX by tlwelker
AWWW YEAH, GOT THIS BY THE ASS.

Establishing page, but I'm sure some of the upcoming changes are already evident! Hell, this time, as cheesy as it feels to do, I even did the timeskip narration bit.

Got ALL the backgrounds ever t'do, auuuuugh.
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:iconsigloestrella:
SigloEstrella Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, that facial expression of Ame's hatred looks mad frightening, like she's about to shred some limbs anytime soon. ^^; Like the others, I too agree with the time skip transition as opposed to having her wake up from a dream. :+fav:
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you~! And maybe she will~

Yar, much more fluid imo!
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:icondremare:
Dremare Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
TIME SKIIIIIIIIIP
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
YISS.
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:iconsigel4ever:
sigel4ever Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student General Artist
nice
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Thanks!
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:iconsigel4ever:
sigel4ever Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student General Artist
honored
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SHITFORBRAINSCHAN Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kind of a weird thing to note, but I find that first panel genuinely terrifying.

And don't feel using the timeskip bit being cheesy, I do it all the time. :B Also, your prowess for detailed backgrounds is certainly evident here.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Ame can be pretty scary at times!

Gaaaw, thank you ;;
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:icongijohn:
GIJohn Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Heh that last panel, her expression is guhhhhhuh? cx

Also are all those black boxes a bit excessive? -w-
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you!

Probably, but I like the way Kousuke Fujishima does transitions and it's akin to this.
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:icongijohn:
GIJohn Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Ah okay ^^

Just almost compelled to highlight them incase there's text hidden somewhere -w-
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:iconbabylonraiderz:
BabylonRaiderz Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Dat first panel. Simply beautiful~ <3
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you~!
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negativedarkangel Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
i must say, i am simply loving Ame's expression after that time skip, but those shadows seem to indicate that she shouldn't be smiling like that unless she's already got a plan, which i suppose is very much possible.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Oh, you'll see~
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:iconnegativedarkangel:
negativedarkangel Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
oh i'm sure i will, just don't go jinxing yourself
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:iconsorantheman:
Sorantheman Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
So...is she in a prison?
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Perrrrhaps!~
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
It was fine I thought, I liked it :)
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:iconblitz-the-hedgehog:
Blitz-the-Hedgehog Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
It looks like they're about to pop out in the last panel.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist
If you look real close, they already have!
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:iconalfredofroylan2:
alfredofroylan2 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
So does the underworld uses the same calendar as the human world? Also boobies.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist
For tracking their prey ease, yar.
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NestTheEchidna Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
Holy eff, Ame's face just sent a chill down my spine. Very nice on the time skip too, definitely feels like there's a good gap with how opposite they are of each other.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Huhuhuuuu~

Thank you!
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:iconparnash121:
Parnash121 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
Gosh, that's like. Mood wiplash from 'I'M GONNA CHOKE A DOUCHE' to 'eh?'

Still, I do like the timeskip stuff. MUCH BETTER.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Intentional~!

Thank you!
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:iconleviadragon99:
leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
Hmm, having a stretch while she surveys the landscape?
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Oh you'll see~
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:iconangelman26:
Angelman26 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
Oh man, can't wait to see the prologue arc redux.

Also, the "time skip" doesn't seem any weirder than any other storytelling device.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist
S'COMIN'~

Yar, just feels cheesy narrating it.
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:iconarbaros:
arbaros Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Been thinking for a while, what exactly contributes to an overfiend's overall strength? I doubt training and exercise like a human would make them any stronger.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist
Heartcores eaten is the biggest contributor.
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:iconarbaros:
arbaros Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Royce and Slade should have really gobbled up on those then...
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP.
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:iconarbaros:
arbaros Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wish you could get stronger by just eating in real life too...
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist
Me too ;;
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Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
wow, nice job ^^
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist
Thanks c:
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:icondragonkingmark:
Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
np
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:iconsalem-the-psychic:
Salem-the-Psychic Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
Never gonna get over it, I love that bottom lip you do.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist
Definitely one of the better changes, thank you!
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:iconsalem-the-psychic:
Salem-the-Psychic Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
What all did you change? I came in later after all.
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:iconalanes:
AlanES Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'EY, you wanna be cheesy with timeskips? Do one later. XD

Man...Ame's hair seems foofier than usual. Like a lion's mane.

I'm ALWAYS gonna wonder what's the deal with the green bit of her hair, though. Is it dye? Spell? Personal choice? Relevant whatsoever!? : O
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist
AUUUUGH NO. NEVER.

Yar, floofy hair forever~

Dye/personal choice, mostly because REBELLIOUS.
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AlanES Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU CAN'T TELL HER WHAT TO DO. YOU'RE NOT HER DAD

Not that it would help, she don't listen to him anyway, amirite?
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist
NAH, in fact it might result in getting your face melted off ;;
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Cukeman Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Artist
Some years later, Ame became utterly captivated by her cleavage.

In all seriousness, I second Sharon on the timeskip transition being smoother.
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:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist
Haaaaw!

Agreed, thank you c:
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