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heartcore:. chp 01 page 28 REDUX by tlwelker heartcore:. chp 01 page 28 REDUX by tlwelker
While most of you know Ame's arm scars very well, she doesn't seem AS keen on showing em in this iteration! Maybe her revealing em is a part of her character growth?? Huhuuu, maybe.

Are the first three panels a little too odd? I'm trying a few things to make things pop, but I don't want to go overboard and have it be too distracting!
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Manock Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
"Oh, those?"

Emerald not impressed, hers are bigger after all.


Wait, it's about SCARS. Nevermind then.
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tlwelker Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist
EMERALD IS STILL NOT IMPRESSED~
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SatoruMasamune Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
I find it hard to believe Emerald would EVER be impressed by ANYTHING Ame does.

Pushed into being catty? Yes.
Impressed? LOLNOPE.
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tlwelker Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist
She's a lot better at getting Royce's attention sadly! ZING.
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Satharia Featured By Owner May 9, 2014   General Artist
You want to know how I got these scars? :iconjokerplz:
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tlwelker Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist
Bahaaaaaaaa~!
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Ninja-8004 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Royce: "Why don't you get off the cross, make a bridge out of it and GET OVER IT!!!"
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tlwelker Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist
YOU'RE NOT MY REAL DAD....oh wait, shit.
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foolyguy Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Love the use of a panel within  a panel with Ame's big reveal, very cleaver way to help viewers focus in on what you were trying to show.

As for the top 3 panels, I think they're perfect as well.  The way they're placed gives the indication they're all staring directly at Ame in correlation to the big reveal panel.  Like before its simple, but very effective~
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tlwelker Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist
Thank you~! Sometimes it's the simple solutions that really make things pop!

Aye, that's the intent! Thank you so much for the input dude!
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