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heartcore:. chp05 page 175 by tlwelker heartcore:. chp05 page 175 by tlwelker
A bit late due to aforementioned sickness, but not missing a day!

Ame!Lilium's last words may lead to something~

And yes, Ame!Lilium having to say the name of the spell while Royce doesn't need to is a bit significant, you'll see when I release the spellbook!
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MissVioletMay Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, you have a spellbook written for everyone here? Nice.

Great work, though it looks like she's boob-stomping his head there. XD
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist
Indeed! I intend to release it at the end of this chapter :3 The spells we've seen, anyway!

I'm perverted enough to where that wouldn't bother me. :B
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MissVioletMay Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting. Can't wait! ^_^

I think it should be a Final Smash move. XD
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RedWingsDragon Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
.... You could intruprate "this new body" line she says in sooooooooo many diffrent ways XD Awesome work here
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist
Haaaw, but I've already shed a little light on that bit, so~

Thanks!
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sonic500 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
Hmmmm again the whole thing about someone needing to say the chants while the
outher person dosint reminds me of Slayers.
Thats not a bad thing though.
Also i cant wait to check out the spell book
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist
Yar, it's a trope with a few series. Apparently it's in Bleach too (but I've never watched it, I've only been told this.)

Glad to hear it!
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sonic500 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
Dont watch bleach.
The frist 3 sesons are ok but sesons
4 and 5 are so bad they might kill any
love you have for anime.
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Kehny Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
It's amazing how you made this comic last.
Last time I read it, it was 2009 I think? Maybe before that.
The good thing about this comic is the lack of loose ends, at this point, the story is very clear. The only thing I don't see yet, is Royce's reason to be such a jerk xD Is he going so far just to eat more heartcores?

Lilium is just too badass, I'm kinda dissapointed about Royce, Slade was more brief and violent xD
This comic is very entertaining, good luck.
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist
Yar, it started in the middle of 2009. I'm still on the intro arc, which is before chapters become more episodic, so I haven't done much promotion yet!

Aye, there's a few mysteries, but nothing that really detracts, or so I like to hope!

Royce has a few things in the past that will definitely explain his grudges, you'll see c: No character is entirely innocent. ...Except maybe Lutz despite his attitude.

You'll be seeing more of all the characters, including Slade, so no worries there, and thank you! c:
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Kehny Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
Oh, and here I thought the story was ending.
I'm glad to see it's begining.
Of course no character is inoccent except Lutz, they're devils xD
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist
Naaah, far from it. This arc is literally to set up Ame's predicament/motivations and of course...a few flashbacks and mysteries here and there.
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Kehny Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
Is the whole story already scripted?
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist
Pretty much. There's some gaps here and there, but the major points are figured out.
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Kehny Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
I see, even better in that case.
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seo123 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Is she gonna kill him??
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist
You'll have to wait and see!
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seo123 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
nuuuuuuuuu DX
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shadowsgalforeve Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe It's ass whooping time~! >8D
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist
Sure looks that way! c:
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Sorantheman Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
So she got him on his belly. does that mean that this is the part where she makes him humble?
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist
No. :U
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Sorantheman Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
...so no camel clutch?
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LSingh Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Will he shed his beastly form and emerge as a beautiful butterfly?
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist
Royce is the prettiest butterfly as is.
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Trakker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Demon wedgy time!
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
Among other things!
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Shadow-da-Hedgie Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I bet this isn't how Royce WANTED his wife to test his new body. xDD
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
Not in the slightest!
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Shadow-da-Hedgie Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He probably chose that one for the size of the equipment rather than the power, after all. xDDD
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shimmyshammy Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
This is a nice page that continues to trend of your own story well and how we continue to see progression in working with new angles, characters and portrayals of fight scenes and humour. What you've done here is good, the layout certianly draws us in from the last page with the continuing surge between bitter rivals. The colours and features of her power in the form of the red flames is a nice touch, it certainly demonstrates who has the upper hand here yet what really makes that work is use of colder tones in the background to allow them to highlight so in the foreground. The use of the cold tones in the background do work well in allowing to the foreground to standout so, but it would have been nice to see a bit more in the background since here it seems you've blurred out certain scene in separate panels which does make it feel a lacking since It doesn't set off as to where they are exactly or if they are changing location etc. From what I can see from my monitor, it also makes it hard to know in two scenes if they are on the ground or not due to the blurred tones. It's not bad, but it is confusing to say the least.

Another area I feel that certainly doesn't have the cut of the knife is the middle panel with him being lunged into the air. This scene would be an example of her brutal strength and power in how she can hurl such a demonic overlord with ease at a great velocity and yet if feels lacking when looked at. The way you've presented it is good, but it's those little features that could make this reach the 100% mark. An example might be to have shown a small window panel in the top corner of Royce's eye presenting the bewailed shock of being thrown such a feat! Another idea would be to show further separation (which they will need anyways if they keep this up XD) to create the force of the throw and a final thought is to have blurred him just a tad to create that sense of motion or movement? The other area to mention is the text feature since that too has a big say in the scene as well. It's nice, but it could be better, much like how you have the 'Bam!' in the lower left panel the same would have worked well here. It's one of those things that indicates or tells us the thrill or thrust of her throw, giving us an idea of just how powerful her attacks can be and especially if it was just a simple toss into the air!

This is a nice piece so don't get me wrong, but to spend a bit more time on the little things would be something to think about next time.
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
Thank you!

Ahhh, they haven't changed scenes, but I sometimes blur the background if I want a focus on the action - but that may of been a mistake on my part. :< It's likely not helped by how dark it is either, and definitely something for me to keep in mind.

I agree with the blurring part, I may just go back and edit this a bit with your advice! c:

Yar, I know whatcha mean. Spending more time on something can push it from a 7/8 to a 9/or even a 10 when done right.
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shimmyshammy Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
Well it take time doesn't it? All part of the learning curve and trying to new ideas really. I'm sure with time and practice you could unleash those talents.
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Hobbyist
Aye, s'all about constantly evolving.
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shimmyshammy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
Certainly a step ahead than me XD
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Icyshadowlord Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Hehe, looks like she's giving Royce a run for his money XP
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
She is~
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Icyshadowlord Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
=3
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negativedarkangel Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
i get the feeling she's TRYING to make him go true form, i doubt she's really in such a mood to lay with her food

although i kinda wonder now how much of this Ame's getting to watch
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
You may be on the right track!

She likely gets to see the bulk of it, given the nature of the mind prison we saw earlier.
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negativedarkangel Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
i see
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Manock Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Makes me assume it's something like Bleach. If you're good enough you can cast a weaker version of Kidou without saying the incantation.


Still though, this page makes me wonder what's again what Royce's business was to gain this (part-human?) body.
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
Yar, except I've never been into Bleach. I'm more into Slayers c:

(Part beastman, actually, it was shown last chapter, and may be shown again~)
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Tokon00 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
^_^ Time for Royce to change his game up I don't think his ego can take much more. Lilium has made Royce her b(ahem).:laughing:
But more importantly Ame got her arm back.
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
S'true, his pride is likely VERY bruised!
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Cukeman Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Student Artist
Yeah, the problem for having a corpse as one's vessel is that they tend to decay. XD

Also, given the Instant Runes in the last panel, it would appear Ame!Lilium is going to eject Rolls Royce from that body... which may end up being a thoroughly stupid move...
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
Yeeeep, and wasn't quite as strong to begin with!

Aye, but is it Lilium doing that? c:
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Cukeman Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Student Artist
Ah, so Rolls is going One Winged Angel (I know, I didn't name the trope >>; ) on her then.

Also, sorry to hear you were under the weather. Hope you're feeling better!
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
Depressing that the trope is named that when I can likely name a dozen examples that predates it :< And yes!

Feeling much better, thank you c:
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leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Ahhh... calling forth the blood... and she knows Royce isn't at his best, which makes one wonder if that might have something to do with what he's been doing for this little sceme...
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